Thread:Monsundo/@comment-24019770-20140813224356/@comment-24019770-20140912101443

I revised it; it's 2,600 words long.

If you're a writing nut, tell me anything I might be doing wrong.

Again, here's the link to the story thus far: Okami. Enjoy, and review if you'd like to (review box is at the bottom of the page, kinda like the comment box)!

You don't have to review if you don't want to, no one is going to force you.

Enjoy

~CardBoss14