User blog comment:NaOH6/Chapter 2- The buddyfight prodigy!/@comment-25144755-20140729114653

Pretty good, but it's a bit confusing, possibly, work on spacing and clarifying. It'll be better if you made is simpler, maybe lengthen the chapter a little so that there's a little bit more story than battle, unless the battle is something that should build up the story. So yeah, it's something you should consider working on.