Thread:Monsundo/@comment-24019770-20140703124517/@comment-5140545-20140705145746

I just had time to sit down and read this and it is great, but I noticed something, I am not a writer, I couldn't seem to think of anything... :( maybe others could be of more help to you, the story is great and I look forward to reading more once it is ready, but I am not sure I can help you as I thought I could, before I tried to think up stuff... again I am sorry