User blog comment:Gouki Daimonji/Unleash Your Buddy Chapter 2: Zanto vs Takuya, The Incredible Card Shop/@comment-24737876-20140616132812

The second last line has problems, :" Hey leave Sora alone a card in the kid's pocket called out" It should be " Hey! Leave Sora alone!" said a card in the Sora's pocket called out. When you find out about the name of a character you immediately change the 'the kid' 'a thirteen year old' into Sora, other than that, I don't see any other problems.