User blog comment:Dreamergirl3000/Buddyfight Fanfic: Buddy Island, Chapter 3: Setting Sail!/@comment-10483040-20140810032312

The chapter was pretty good, improveemtns were shown EXCEPT FOR ONE PROBLEM!!!!

and whatever the reason he CAN’T be should be pretty damn important for him to be missing this. So don’t be so down and try to have some fun! I bet you’ll have an amazing story to tell Apollo when we all get back, especially how we’re all gonna win it for the team!” Scarlet said, thumping on Luna’s back. Luna was a little windblown, but managed a smile while she caught her breath.

Since i submitted Luna i know the problem in that line. She should hve bene Sad out of her mind when someone said that since you know WHAT HAPPENED TO APOLLO

But everything else was fine