Thread:Maddog98/@comment-4842541-20151115095231/@comment-4842541-20160407064951

I've had the idea for a while that Mark would be about to kill Jack but Layla stops Mark by revealing the truth. The original intent would be to have the event happen during an arc in which Roy is kidnapped by Shadow and Mark goes to the dark realm where they reside to save Roy.

Course now, while I'm still thinking of having that kidnapping of Roy arc, I'm thinking it might be better to have the event happen a little bit earlier in an arc which so far I'm thinking of it being some sort of swords appear from the air, stab the ground, and begin draining the mana and thus life from the areas in which they're stabbed into. The big central one being in their town of New Arcadia of course.

Can't quite figure out if it would be better to have it happen a little bit earlier or to keep Jack's identity from Mark later. The context is that I'm thinking that around book 3 or 4, Layla would have already found out about Jack's identity anyway, which may mean that making Jack's identity hidden from Mark for a super long time to be an asinine thing.

What do you think?