User blog comment:Geobuddyfight100/my buddyfight persona/@comment-24971427-20160903023353

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Personal Details

Name: George Micho

Age:15

Personality: George is a kind and caring person, he's very friendly towards everyone. Though he might be easy-to-anger sometimes, but that completely changes while he's in a Buddyfight! When he's in the game, he starts acting very serious and stays focused on the game. He's passionate about Buddyfights and has a fear of heights(Acrophobia). [There, it sounds better now.]

Buddyfight Details

World: Legend World

Buddy: Demon Wolf, Fenrir

Core Deck Case: It is the colour of purple cloves.

Special Abilities

Buddy Skill: When Fenrir lends George his buddy skill, George becomes a Master of Hand to Hand Combat. He's tough to defeat when he's in this powerful state.

Social Life

Friends: Kostas, Sotiria, Georgia(Is this the female version and his girlfriend or something?), Dimitri, Xristo(X? Really?), Antreas, Kostatina(Female version of Kostas?). [I recommend names of actual people, just uncommon yet still easy or interesting to read.]

[No point in writing family if they're unnamed.]