User blog comment:Natsu Fury/Enter the Buddy Zone Chapter 1 The Way Of The BuddyFighter/@comment-25144755-20140728235009

SO COOL! And my character won the first match in the story! Thank you, Natsu-san! I also like it how there aren't so many characters, but each is so distinct, like how Zion is that way and Akira and Jessie are another way and all that stuff. It's so cool, and the whole "little did they know, they were beign watched" thing is so cool! I can't wait to read the next chapter and i hope it comes out soon.

But there is one thing i would like to point out.

The " is supposed to be conected the the statment of the character like this "How a buddy monster and human could fall in love was beyond him". Like that, and ther are a lot more of these things (") than there are sentences, so it get a bit confusing to look at from time to time, but still understandable.

Overall, it's got a few rough edges in what i mentioned earlier, but that's easily fixed. Can't wait till the next chapter, and i have a suggestion. It came to me yesterday when my classmates mentioned it. Here's the Link: [http://buddyfight.wikia.com/wiki/User_blog:Dreamergirl3000/A_weird_Scenario_my_Classmates_Made_me_think_about._:D A Weird Scenario My Classmates Made Me Think About! :D]

Hope you can enterpret it into Keiko and Ganzack's roles for some sort of comic relief or something! :)

Ari out!! :D