User blog comment:Lgw7777/Buddyfight Fanfic Chapter One/@comment-10483040-20140719170352/@comment-10483040-20140719173557

I understand but

from the wait to how short the chapter is. Its just so dissapointingly tiny

No set up. confusing setting, No real introduction to heroes or anything...

OMG ITS LIKE THE FIRST EPISODE OF THE SHOW

in that case 5/4 ten gold stars... you have done a fantastic job adapting the show