Thread:Dreamergirl3000/@comment-24019770-20141019024140/@comment-25144755-20141102045451

It's alright, Card-sama, at least, let her show up and spread her wings a little, let her use the Hissiatsu she's got or maybe just her mind and body, either is cool, and also, i personally like the way you right. Nice to see writers with a different writing style from time to time, and while yours oes need a bit more concentration to get, i think you write like a real pro! So do me a favor, and keep on writing? Okami is amazing so far, and i think, in time, someone's gonna see it and say "Wow! This story's amazing! I might just ask whoever owns this if he or she wants to publish it!". Trust me, man, Okami's gonna go a long, long way, provided you don't give up on it, that is. ;)