User blog comment:Dreamergirl3000/Buddyfight Fanfic, Buddy Island, Chapter 1: News/@comment-10483040-20140731104106/@comment-10483040-20140731121720

Well

ERRUPTED should be Erupted

And our should as the

You dont need And me after I, thats bad usage of grammer. It should be``  I Cheered as my best guy friend...``

Childern should be Children

Ruby is Ruby Not Roby

Pulting is not a word

I dont see any more but if i do i`ll update...my eyes are hurting so..