Thread:Maddog98/@comment-4842541-20150606031801/@comment-4842541-20150610190437

I've been doing a little practicing with the fights.

So far I've been describing little by little the steps on how the fight goes. It's usually in the perspective of Mark and the descriptions of moves coming comes from his point of view.

Every little step would be described in as much detail as I can get.

Something like:

Mark swung his staff at the ninja. An impact sounded, and the ninja was thrown far towards the palm tree. Usually a relief, the ease in how this strike got in seemed suspicious. Mark looked towards the direction where the ninja had flown, but saw a sawed off log instead.

Before he got a chance to even process what had happened, Mark felt a surge above him. He looked up, and the ninja was coming down with an electrified axe. Mark had to dodge, he had to move, but the ninja was too quick. Mark got struck, a crack of thunder sounding upon the hit.

Mark stood motionless. The ninja landed in front of Mark and watched as Mark began to lose balance. "It's over." The ninja said. "Rest in peace, nameless Guardian." The ninja held out his index finger and pushed Mark's forehead. . . but Mark was not falling.

Mark grinned, and the ninja looked at the axe. Mark was holding the blade of the axe with his bare right hand. "Don't think it's going to be that easy." Mark said. He focused mana into his left hand and with a focused palm strike, blasted the ninja away with the mana. "Because you're going to get burned."

So yeah, something like that. I'm still practicing to make it better, but all in all, that's what I want to go for.