Thread:MrCFVanguard/@comment-25144755-20140707102839/@comment-6881157-20140707111135

I read it through, pretty good I guess. Once I started reading I didn't want to stop which is always a good sign when it comes to fanfiction. The gambling theme is quite a good one, though it's a little predictable. The end seemed to come out of nowhere, it was kinda surprising, which is good I guess.

Overall I liked it so good job :)