User blog comment:Guardian Fira/Fighters Unite! Chapter 5: Dangerous Rumors/@comment-5262434-20140718160622

Just tuning in and so far I'm liking it~

I can see some improvements through the chapters as well so good job xD

Etto... With that said how many characters are you planning to include in the fic? Developing such a large cast might be a pain to manage and may cause a draggy start due to a new character popping in every chapter. People who were not part of the whole character submissions may have a problem with connecting to said characters because of a large cast. Or even understanding them apart from the others because they weren't developed enough or weren't given enough attention because another character steals the spotlight (looks at Kagome*)  Nothing against the character though, was quite an interesting way to introduce said character.

Spacing the paragraphs and sentences should make it much more enjoyable to read as well, especially during the fights.

Keep it up, looking forward to the next chapter :3