User blog comment:Guardian Fira/Fighters Unite! Chapter 11: Sorin VS Tengu! Demonic Return/@comment-12248971-20140827175736

List of mistakes :

Sorin stood opposite Tengu - should be "stood opposite OF" or "Stood opposing"

"Kimensai, Attack his Slime" - the word " attack" shoudn't be capitalized

not really much else to say about this part except the extreme lack of emotion comming from tengu...as much as it bothers me, i know i can expect something sooner or later

surprise me :P