Thread:Maddog98/@comment-4842541-20151115095231/@comment-5397676-20151116214657

So just wanted you to know that the reason I haven't been responding is because I haven't had a good chance to sit down on the computer and make a reply. Also I think we should start a new thread becuase for some reason the one for Guardian isn't showing up in my notifications.

Ok with that out of the way.

Ok so as you said it does need some work, but I do enjoy the basis. Now my question is how far into the first chapter is Mark introduced becuase I recall you saying that it starts off with Layla looking for Max.