User blog comment:NaOH6/Future Card Buster Hunt- Noah/@comment-6171008-20140907013651

Okay, Naoh, first rule of background, give reasons for actions and don't leave holes in a character's story.

1. Why did he run away from the orphanage and why did he go into the wilderness instead of within the city.

2. Being a prince is not protecting people, that makes no sense. Prince is getting spoiled rotten, something he might have had experience with before he got orphaned. Where did he get the image of becoming a prince from?

3. If he's in the wilderness, why would he return? And how does living in the wilderness help him becoming a prince in general?

4. Why DOES he want to protect people? Has it something to do with his parents deaths? Or did something happen at the orphanage that he regrets?