Thread:CardBoss14/@comment-25151353-20141130152049/@comment-25151353-20141223184503

Yeah see that was my problem. The way you have introduced the story there is no problem with Darmania the only plot is getting Isamu human again. Now think think think what could be a motive or a plan that could be used. Card the only thing wring with the overlord plan is this. What does he hope to achieve with his "puppets"? Maybe it could be the opposite also I think you scratch the animals losing their powers because that would suck. Zaku is playing Kasai completely. OK? He's going to make thhe clans/guilds his puppets so that he can get them all to agree to help him take down Kasai(the main villian right?). But then really with that plan there is no reason for Isamu. For this association to work Isamu has to be centered around it. If Isamu is not a necessity for the association then the story itself is kind of  slopppily made. Isamu has to have some kind of significance or special power that makes him valuable or the dreams would not have happened, The guardian would not  have saved him. Also, the she-wolf in the dream would not have talked to him at all. Card there's a serious problem. Isamu has to be of some importance or the association will be useless. What can we do?