User blog:Dragonic Vargas/Fanfiction Idea OG series Reboot!

Hi guys. Recently I've thought of a fanfiction idea focused on the story of a certain Omni Lord who became buddies with a boy who lived in Cho-tokyo while his mum, and only family, is overseas working. This dates back to just before the Gaen cup and replaces characters like Gao, Tasuku (for some of you please don't be mad, this is just an idea for my own version of the anime). The fanfiction would include a larger backstory to some of the characters, especially Kyoya (he will be different) but would venture more into the Harem genre as long as I up the age of characters and do some research about how things work in Japan.

As this dates back to the events of the Gaen Cup, I had a few ideas on new buddies and tried to keep it balanced. I am not really experienced with the game back then so I am asking for well in balancing card ideas. The buddy monster of the main character hails from Darkness Dragon World and she is on a mission. She goes undercover as a Dragon World monster (so the main character uses Dragon World throughout Part 1) but reveals her true self during the Omni Lord arc.

Here is the buddy monster (Dragon World disguise): Inferno Lance Dragon, Nuldria

Type: Monster World: Dragon World Attribute: Armordragon, Black Dragon

Size: 2 Power: 5000 Defense: 5000 Critical: 2 [Call Cost] [Pay 1 Gauge and 1 Life and put the top card of your deck into this card's soul] When this card enters the field, choose a monster on the field and destroy it. [Move][Penetrate][Soulguard]

Her main weapons are lances and spears so I thought it would make sense that she had the penetrate ability.

What do you guys think? Any thoughts? Also the main character is kinda like Kiri before the Gaen Cup if anyone remembers. He gets bullied and doesn't ever win and his only friend is the Buddy Police Wonder Girl Cop (I did say Harem genre, I know its kinda inappropriate but this is just fan made).