User blog comment:Guardian Fira/Fighters Unite! Chapter 9: Truths revealed! Round 2 is up/@comment-24965906-20140817161522

Okay, first and foremost...

OMG!!!1! MY CHARACTER WON DANGER WORLD BEST WURL 5-EVAR!!!1!1!


 * Ahem* Well, now that my blatant favouritism is over. This was a good chapter, especially both fights. You seem to be getting the hang of writing them. I applaud Yuki, she really appeared to have a sound strategy (but two Magical Goodbye's back to back?)

A bit of problem is that there's little to no reaction by the opposing player on the turn player's turn. Like...during Samuel's turn, Yuki rarely grunted when hit or even a little thought bubble about her opponent's strategy unless she countered. You don't have to do it for every turn, but at least once in a while makes the characters a bit more...lifelike. Not really necessary point, just an observation.

Overall, good. Can't wait until we see if my team can defeat Plot Armor or not, lol.

Go Team Unknown!